Your Scream poem has exceptional use of line breaks. It makes it quite frightening!
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Broklyn
5/25/2012 03:41:36 am
Linda like your poem because you add your own littel words in the end and i like how you talk in the 3rd prson.
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Khang
5/25/2012 03:41:54 am
Mariah,What music did you use in All Alone?
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tionna
5/25/2012 03:42:02 am
brooke,
I think that you have a very good authors note
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Mariam
5/25/2012 03:42:47 am
Myka, Adding on to Jason's and Mrs.Mercier it goes great with your acting and it goes great with the video
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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 03:44:37 am
Gunnar, Your you poems have quite a bit of humor, but at the same time...make you think!!!
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Khang
5/25/2012 03:45:06 am
Mariam,I like the Effects you used But can you use more Effects like Zzzzzz! Cizzzzz!
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tionna
5/25/2012 03:45:50 am
linda
haha i love your candy peom it is inspring and i know u love eating candy.
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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 03:46:40 am
Jaeden,
You must REALLY love your dad to write two poems about him. You also use repetition well in your poems.
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mariah
5/25/2012 03:47:39 am
you sould talk more gunnar
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Khang
5/25/2012 03:47:48 am
Mariam,Why did you Write ThunderStorm?
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Linda
5/25/2012 03:48:03 am
Miguel, you used repition on luis P.S you really love your brother dont you!
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lindsay
5/25/2012 03:52:30 am
i bet he does
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lindsay
5/25/2012 03:49:27 am
Jason,
I like the title "Done with work".
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Miguel
5/25/2012 03:49:50 am
Tionna, I like your sun poem and how you described it.
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alex
5/25/2012 03:50:02 am
miguel your poem was so ice if your brother saw that poem he would cry its so so so so so so so so so so nice i now know that you love your brother alot
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Linda
5/25/2012 03:53:12 am
Alex you are right miguel loves his brother! I just want to cry!
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brooklyn
5/25/2012 03:50:31 am
Khang, I like your songifi poems and I like how you put part one tow and so on.
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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 03:50:53 am
Khang,
What a great series of poems about Fire! You use line breaks well in them!
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Khang
5/25/2012 03:55:27 am
Mariam,How did you come up with Clouds?
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jaeden
5/25/2012 03:56:49 am
lindsay,
I agree
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Khang
5/25/2012 03:58:05 am
Jason,What is the Isty Bitsy?
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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 03:58:49 am
Linda,
You use repetition like an expert in your I Ate poem! Not only do you repeat the beginning of the lines, but you also include rhyming!
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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 03:59:43 am
Mariah,
I can tell that Maya Angelou's poem Alone inspired your All Alone poem!
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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 04:00:49 am
Mariam,
My favorite poem that you wrote is Clouds. I love the line breaks, free verse, and how you really get the sense that the clouds are following you!
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mariah
5/25/2012 04:01:50 am
you have no rule lindsay
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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 04:02:06 am
Rayshawn, I really enjoy how you performed your About the Author.
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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 04:03:00 am
Tionna,
Your poem Vampire Beaches really demonstrates ending with your best line!
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gunnar
5/25/2012 04:03:24 am
mariam,
gold is so youer style and you where borin
on 2003 just like me.
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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 04:04:02 am
Trevor, I can tell how you feel about ghosts from your Ghost poem!!!