We would love your feedback on our poems and our "About the Authors" on each page!  Thank you for taking the time to read our anthology.

Mrs. Mercier's Class
Mariam
5/25/2012 03:22:23

Trevor, I like your poems because it sounds like it has rythm

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Linda
5/25/2012 03:23:47

Myka, i love your poem it has a good rythem P.S I bet you love your dog.

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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 03:42:33

Lindsay,

I agree with your comment! She must love her dog to write 4 poems!!!

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lindsay
5/25/2012 03:25:09

Alex, i like how you did your songify on Randy Moss.

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5/25/2012 03:26:34

Myka,

I love the British accent you used when you created your About the Author. It really highlights your acting talents.

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Jason
5/25/2012 03:32:55

I love your british accent is great when you used it in your video

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lindsay
5/25/2012 03:36:52

Myka,

Your british accsent can tell that you thae acting classes.

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trevor
5/25/2012 03:28:10

miguel,

yoiu have really good onomotopeia.

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Jason
5/25/2012 03:49:15

I like your poem all three you did a excellent at making poems

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brooklyn
5/25/2012 03:29:11

Trevor i like that you added a few extra things about you'self.

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Jason
5/25/2012 03:40:53

I like your recess poem i think you did a excellent job about doing your poem!!

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trevor
5/25/2012 03:31:14

brooke,

you have good onomotopeia, metaphor and simile.

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Linda
5/25/2012 03:31:45

Brooke,

You used Rythem andyou saidyou broke the silence on try noot to scream nice!

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Lindsay
5/25/2012 03:32:17

Gunnar,

I love the angle you used in your authors note.

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jaeden
5/25/2012 03:32:35

miguel,

You had supporting details I like it a lot

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alex
5/25/2012 03:33:01

jaeden i like how you wrote about your dad know that i lisended to your poem i see in my head that your dad is very talented

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Mariam
5/25/2012 03:34:04

Mariah, i like your poem alone because it has repetition

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5/25/2012 03:35:07

Miguel, your poem about the dream has great examples of repetition. Not to mention that you end with your best line!

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Khang
5/25/2012 03:36:34

Did you feel all alone when you made the Poem All Alone? To Mariah

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gunnar
5/25/2012 03:54:31

khang you where borin on june 2nd 2003
I injoy youer's.

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jaeden
5/25/2012 03:36:46

mariam,

I loved the part about marshmellos

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lindsay
5/25/2012 03:38:18

Jaeden,

i agree.

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5/25/2012 03:37:38

Lindsay, Great use of line breaks in your Bird poem!

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alex
5/25/2012 03:38:32

rayshawn i like how you did hand moves when you whal you were talking

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5/25/2012 03:39:03

Alex,

I bet your mom will LOVE hearing your songified poem!

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Khang
5/25/2012 03:39:46

Mariah,What was your favorite poem?

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tionna
5/25/2012 03:40:09

Jeaden you have good authors note




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tionna
5/25/2012 03:49:00

you have good grammer

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mariah
5/25/2012 03:40:15

you should add more mariam

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5/25/2012 03:40:30

Brooke,

Your Scream poem has exceptional use of line breaks. It makes it quite frightening!

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Broklyn
5/25/2012 03:41:36

Linda like your poem because you add your own littel words in the end and i like how you talk in the 3rd prson.

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Khang
5/25/2012 03:41:54

Mariah,What music did you use in All Alone?

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tionna
5/25/2012 03:42:02

brooke,



I think that you have a very good authors note

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Mariam
5/25/2012 03:42:47

Myka, Adding on to Jason's and Mrs.Mercier it goes great with your acting and it goes great with the video

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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 03:44:37

Gunnar, Your you poems have quite a bit of humor, but at the same time...make you think!!!

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Khang
5/25/2012 03:45:06

Mariam,I like the Effects you used But can you use more Effects like Zzzzzz! Cizzzzz!

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tionna
5/25/2012 03:45:50

linda

haha i love your candy peom it is inspring and i know u love eating candy.

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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 03:46:40

Jaeden,

You must REALLY love your dad to write two poems about him. You also use repetition well in your poems.

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mariah
5/25/2012 03:47:39

you sould talk more gunnar

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Khang
5/25/2012 03:47:48

Mariam,Why did you Write ThunderStorm?

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Linda
5/25/2012 03:48:03

Miguel, you used repition on luis P.S you really love your brother dont you!

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lindsay
5/25/2012 03:52:30

i bet he does



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lindsay
5/25/2012 03:49:27

Jason,

I like the title "Done with work".

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Miguel
5/25/2012 03:49:50

Tionna, I like your sun poem and how you described it.

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alex
5/25/2012 03:50:02

miguel your poem was so ice if your brother saw that poem he would cry its so so so so so so so so so so nice i now know that you love your brother alot

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Linda
5/25/2012 03:53:12

Alex you are right miguel loves his brother! I just want to cry!

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brooklyn
5/25/2012 03:50:31

Khang, I like your songifi poems and I like how you put part one tow and so on.

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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 03:50:53

Khang,

What a great series of poems about Fire! You use line breaks well in them!

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Khang
5/25/2012 03:55:27

Mariam,How did you come up with Clouds?

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jaeden
5/25/2012 03:56:49

lindsay,

I agree

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Khang
5/25/2012 03:58:05

Jason,What is the Isty Bitsy?

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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 03:58:49

Linda,

You use repetition like an expert in your I Ate poem! Not only do you repeat the beginning of the lines, but you also include rhyming!

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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 03:59:43

Mariah,

I can tell that Maya Angelou's poem Alone inspired your All Alone poem!

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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 04:00:49

Mariam,

My favorite poem that you wrote is Clouds. I love the line breaks, free verse, and how you really get the sense that the clouds are following you!

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mariah
5/25/2012 04:01:50

you have no rule lindsay

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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 04:02:06

Rayshawn, I really enjoy how you performed your About the Author.

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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 04:03:00

Tionna,

Your poem Vampire Beaches really demonstrates ending with your best line!

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gunnar
5/25/2012 04:03:24

mariam,

gold is so youer style and you where borin
on 2003 just like me.

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Mrs. Mercier
5/25/2012 04:04:02

Trevor, I can tell how you feel about ghosts from your Ghost poem!!!

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Miguel
5/25/2012 04:08:07

Gunnar, it sounds like you really like legos.

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Brooke's Dad
5/25/2012 04:20:02

Terrific Poems Brooke! :o)

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Brooke's Dad
5/25/2012 04:23:18

And I really like the "About the Author" video.

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Brooklyn
5/25/2012 05:39:55

Thanks dad love you

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